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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. AYo1
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to get numerous details regarding accommodation in Australia that your rental company can arrange for me. Recently, I got admission at central Queensland university in Melbourne for persuading my Masters degree in Public health. The orientation will be going to held on 8th of July so that I must be there earlier to successfully. complete my enrolment. I am going to travel Australia along with my husband, for that reason I would like to live in separate housing rather than staying in university hostel. To be exact I prefer to stay in a studio and that too my budget is & 1500 dollars per month including utilities. For instance, well-equiped kitchen as well as fully-furnished living room and bedroom and it would be grateful if the place is closer to all amenities like shopping centre. Hopefully your agency could find a excellent property for me to rent. looking forward to get your prompt response in the future. Yours faithfully, Ranga.
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
numerous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
regarding accommodation in Australia that your rental
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company
can arrange for me. Recently, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
admission at central Queensland university in Melbourne for persuading my
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree in Public health. The orientation will be going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "hold"
held
on 8th of July
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so
that I
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must
be there earlier
Did you mean "too"?
to
successfully
.
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complete
my
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enrolment
. I am going to travel Australia along with my husband, for that reason I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in separate housing
rather
than staying in university hostel. To be exact I prefer to stay in a studio and that too my budget is & 1500 dollars per month including utilities.
For instance
,
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well-equiped
kitchen
as well
as
fully
-furnished living room and bedroom and it would be grateful if the place is closer to all amenities like shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
.
Hopefully
your agency could find
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
excellent property for me to rent.
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looking
forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your prompt response in the future. Yours
faithfully
,
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Ranga
.
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IELTS letter You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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