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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were oMdK
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter because I need your assistance in recovering my bag which I had left on the plane while I was flying from London to Vancouver. The flight which I took that day was British Airways 737 and my seat number was 19 B. I clearly remember that during the entire flight my bag was placed under the seat since I had no place else to keep it. However, when we landed in Vancouver I forgot it at the same place. The colour of the bag is red with a golden MK logo which is engraved on its back. Moreover, it has a keychain with my name on it which is hung with its zip. Inside the bag, you can find an i-pod along with the earphones, an i-pad and a cardholder which contains my bank cards. You are requested to kindly investigate the issue and help me retrieve my bag as it contains valuable items. Looking forward to your support. Yours sincerely, Ifrah.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter
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because
I need your assistance in recovering my
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bag
which I had
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left
on the
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plane
while I was flying from London to Vancouver. The flight which I took that day was British Airways 737 and my seat number was 19 B.

I
clearly
remember that during the entire flight my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
was placed
under the seat since I had no place else to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it.
However
, when we landed in Vancouver I forgot it at the same place.

The
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colour
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
is red
with a golden MK logo which
is engraved
on its back.
Moreover
, it has a
Possible spelling mistake found.
keychain
with my name on it which
is hung
with its zip. Inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
, you can find an i-pod along with the earphones, an i-pad and a cardholder which contains my bank cards.

You
are requested
to kindly investigate the issue and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me retrieve my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
as it contains valuable items.

Looking forward to your support.

Yours
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Ifrah
.
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IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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