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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you 50DD
Dear Parth, I am writing this letter to express my feeling that I was so elated to seeing you after long time. Its been five year we haven't meet each other and the time spent with you last week so enjoyable. I still remember how we used to go school by train, It was really good time talking about our child hood memories. I still can't believe that I stayed with you for two weeks. You took me to all the places where we used to play and spent our time. I was so exited when you arranged paragliding for me. I was never been to such thrilling experience in my life and watching sky with bird view. I have a holidays in February month. You can come over and we will plan another exiting road trip. I will arrange two mountain bikes for our trip. Give my regards to your parents. Looking forward to your reply. Best regards, Nilam
Dear
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Parth
,

I am writing this letter to express my feeling that I was
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so
elated to seeing you after long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
Did you mean "It's" (="It has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
been five year we haven't
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meet
each other and the
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time
spent with you last week
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so
enjoyable.

I
still
remember how we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to go school by train, It was
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
talking about our child hood memories. I
still
can't believe that I stayed with you for two weeks. You took me to all the places where we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to play and spent our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
Did you mean "excited" (=enthusiastic) instead of 'exited' (=gone away)?
exited
when you arranged paragliding for me. I was never been to such thrilling experience in my life and watching sky with bird view.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a holiday" or simply "holidays"?
a holidays
in February month. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
over and
we will plan another exiting road trip. I will arrange two mountain bikes for our trip.

Give my regards to your parents. Looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

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Nilam

IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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