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A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: give details of what you know about his company explain your current situation give your answer to the offer and explain why

A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: give details of what you know about his company explain your current situation give your answer to the offer and explain why d7mK

Dear Vijay, I am obliged to you offering a job opportunity in your network company "stemmons business private limited. " I am very well for your company growth and have many projects to learn new things. I have also received offers from TCS company. However, I regret to inform you that my company has been working on a long project of three month such as a government project of installation of CCTV on traffic signals and Highway. I am unable to join This time of my company projects and I can't do the burden of my work to give to other team members because I am a key person of the project and know about top to bottom. I am very well know about your company's future and also giving me a great opportunity to post as well as a better salary package instead of my current employer. I can't leave this current project and that project works on a longer maximum 3 month. If there is no urgency in your company, fill my vacancy after three months. Please accept my application and hope you understand my situation. Regards Hemang

Dear Vijay,

I am obliged
 to you offering a job opportunity in your network You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
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stemmons
 business private limited. Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 growth and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
projects
 to learn new things. I have also
 received offers from TCS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

However
, I regret to inform you that my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 has been working on a long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 of three Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 such as a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 of installation of CCTV on traffic signals and Highway. I am unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 This time of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
projects
 and I can't do the burden of my work to give to other team members This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am a key person of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 and know about top to bottom.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Did you mean "well-known"?well-known
well know
 about your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's future and also
 giving me a great opportunity to post as well
 as a better salary package instead
 of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 employer. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 and that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 works on a longer maximum 3 Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
. If there is no urgency in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, fill my vacancy after three months. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept my application and hope you understand my situation.

Regards

Possible spelling mistake found.Hem ang
Hemang