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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You doV6r
Dear Sir/Dear Sir/Madam, My name is John Doe, I was a patron at your newly opened restaurant on Victorian close. I would like to make an official complaint on services received when I visited. I recently visited your restaurant to celebrate my 10 years wedding anniversary. Since this was a big milestone, I decided we needed to celebrate with a night out for the whole family. The first issue I encountered was the overbooking system. Apparently, my table had been booked over to another couple and we had to wait another 30 minutes before we were offered another table. This was an issue to me and my family as we had booked days ahead to ensure we got the fountain view and yet we ended up been seated close to the kitchen. The constant bang and smell from the kitchen didn't create for a condusive environment at all. Secondly, the food served was under-cooked and not edible at all. Given the fact that we came out with our kids, they had a hard time with chewing and swallowing the meal due to its state. Finally, we were hurried from our dinner because the restaurant was experiencing over crowding and they need to seat other patrons. This placed a damper on our celebratory mood. May I suggest that for future purpose, a new booking system be introduced. We have new applications that can handle booking and scheduling fluently. Also, a change in the present chef or a training program should be organised. Skills become redundant when not improved upon over time using trainings or seminars. I hope the above suggestions are considered as this would lead to improvement in service provided and also drive traffic to your restaurant. Yours faithfully, John Doe.
Dear Sir/Dear Sir/Madam, My name is John Doe, I was a patron at your
newly
opened
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
on Victorian close. I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an official complaint on services received when I visited. I recently visited your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
to celebrate my 10 years wedding anniversary. Since this was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
milestone, I decided we needed to celebrate with a night out for the whole family. The
first
issue I encountered was the overbooking system.
Apparently
, my table had
been booked
over to another
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
couple and
we had to wait another 30 minutes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
we
were offered
another table. This was an issue to me and my family as we had booked days ahead to ensure we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the fountain
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
view and
yet
we ended up
been seated
close to the kitchen. The constant bang and smell from the kitchen didn't create for a
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condusive
environment at all.
Secondly
, the food served was under-cooked and not edible at all.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
the fact that we came out with our kids, they had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
time with chewing and swallowing the meal due to its state.
Finally
, we
were hurried
from our dinner
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
was experiencing over
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
crowding and
they need to seat other patrons. This placed a damper on our celebratory mood. May I suggest that for future purpose, a new booking system
be introduced
. We have new applications that can handle booking and scheduling
fluently
.
Also
, a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the present chef or a training program should be
Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.
organised
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Skills
become redundant when not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
upon over time using trainings or seminars. I hope the above suggestions
are considered
as this would lead to improvement in service provided and
also
drive traffic to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. Yours
faithfully
, John Doe.

IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You

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  American English
1 paragraphs
291 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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