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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. kYRnR
Dear Shahrooz, Thank you for accepting my request to taking care of the Jango for the holiday when I'm in the Bahamas. I've sent you this letter to give you some info you need to know about my dog and my house. Don't hesitate to contact me when you need to ask anything. You can call me anytime on my phone or through Whatsapp. I've written the number on a sticky note which I left on the fridge. If there was something unpredicted, I let you know. My dog needs to be fed twice a day, so put his favorite food, which you can find, under the kitchen sink. Also, he likes to play with his toy in the garden. If you take him out for a walk, he will be overjoyed. I would like you to water my plants, too. All of them need to be watered, but please water them when the plant's soil is dry. Finally, for the dog and the house security, make sure that the door is locked correctly because sometimes the doors seem to be closed, but it doesn't. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Warm wishes, Payam
Dear
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Shahrooz
,

Thank you for accepting my request to taking care of the
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Jango
for the holiday when I'm in the Bahamas. I've
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some
info you
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need
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house
.

Don't hesitate to contact me when you
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need
to ask anything. You can call me anytime on my phone or through
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Whatsapp
. I've written the number on a sticky note which I
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left
on the fridge. If there was something
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unpredicted
, I
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let
you know.

My dog
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needs
to
be fed
twice a day,
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so
put his favorite food, which you can find, under the kitchen sink.
Also
, he likes to play with his toy in the garden. If you take him out for a walk, he will
be overjoyed
.

I would like you to water my plants, too. All of them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
be watered
,
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but
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please
water them when the plant's soil is dry.
Finally
, for the dog and the
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house
security,
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make
sure that the door
is locked
correctly
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because
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sometimes
the doors seem to
be closed
,
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but
it doesn't.

I look forward to seeing you on my return.

Warm wishes,

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Payam
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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