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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem 7aAB3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to formally lodge a complaint about the uncomfortable, and sometimes unbearable, noise which keeps coming from the ongoing road construction works in the adjacent areas to my house. To introduce myself a little, my name is Nicholas Fauci, and I live on Lindsay Street, next to Fairmont Shopping Centre in Hampshire area. The road repair works, I am talking about, has been going on for almost one week with the use of heavy vehicles and construction tools, from morning to late night, sometimes. Naturally, the continuous sounds, generated by heavy machinery and tools, are causing a lot of troubles for many residents in our neighbourhood. Some people in our area are already complaining about a bad headache. The school-going children are also struggling to concentrate on the studies. Not to mention, of course, the trouble with sleeping has also become a major concern for many residents in our locality because of the noises. Therefore, I would like to request you to employ addition manpower to finish the construction works as soon as possible and save us from the trouble of these unbearable noises. Yours faithfully, Nicholas Fauci
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
formally
lodge a complaint about the uncomfortable, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
unbearable, noise which
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keeps
coming from the ongoing road construction works in the adjacent areas to my
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house
. To introduce myself a
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little
, my name is Nicholas
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Fauci
, and I
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live
on Lindsay Street,
next
to Fairmont Shopping
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Centre
in Hampshire area.

The road repair works, I am talking about, has been going on for almost one week with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of heavy vehicles and construction tools, from morning to late night,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
.
Naturally
, the continuous sounds, generated by heavy machinery and tools, are causing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
troubles for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
residents in our
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.
neighbourhood
.
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Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in our area are already complaining about a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
headache. The school-going children are
also
struggling to concentrate on the studies. Not to mention,
of course
, the trouble with sleeping has
also
become a major concern for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
residents in our locality
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the noises.

Therefore
, I would like to request you to employ addition manpower to finish the construction works as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible and save us from the trouble of these unbearable noises.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nicholas
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Fauci
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IELTS letter Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

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  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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