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Informal letter.complain letter.

Informal letter.complain letter. AjLDx
Dear Mr. . . . As a client of your workshop I am writing to draw your attention to the problem with my car which I faced. I am really upset about the service I received on 20 th October. I had my car repaired at your workshop last week. But after sime days several things were wrong with it again. After driving my car during some days the engine began showing signes of overheating and the windscreen wipers stopped working although you said that it was in perfect order. I feel that you acted virrwsponsibly in issuing a car which was not safe to drive. So I want you to come me and I repair my car again to make me feel better after the distress I was forced to suffer as a result of your negigence. I hope this matter will recieve your immediate attention. Yours faithfully
Dear Mr.
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As
a client of your workshop I am writing to draw your attention to the problem with my
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car
which I faced. I am
really
upset about the service I received on
Did you mean "20th"?
20 th
October. I had my
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car
repaired at your workshop last week.
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But
after
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sime
days several things were
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wrong
with it again. After driving my
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car
during
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some
days the engine began showing
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signes
of overheating and the windscreen wipers
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stopped
working although you said that it was in perfect order. I feel that you acted
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virrwsponsibly
in issuing a
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car
which was not safe to drive.
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So
I want you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
me and I repair my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
again to
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make
me feel better after the distress I
was forced
to suffer
as a result
of your
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negigence
. I hope this matter will
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recieve
your immediate attention. Yours
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faithfully

IELTS letter Informal letter.complain letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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