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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem g5ypA

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the disturbance caused by the ongoing road repair work in our locality. My name is Will Smith and I am a resident of Hillsborough Street on the Lake Tahoe. I have been living in this area for the last ten years. For the past few days, a lot of road repair work has been going on here and it sometimes extends late into the night. The noise from the heavy machines is causing inconvenience to me as well as to other residents in the neighborhood, and as a result, we are unable to sleep at night. Moreover, there are students living in the area who are unable to study as they have their exams coming up. I would like to suggest that you employ additional workers to speed up the repair process and strictly confine the work to daytime as most of the residents and students are in their offices and schools. I hope the issue will be resolved soon. Yours sincerely Will Smith

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to draw your attention to the disturbance caused by the ongoing road repair work in our locality. My name is Will Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Smith, and
Smith and
 I am a resident of Hillsborough Street on the Lake Tahoe. I have been living in this area for the last ten years.

For the past few days, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 road repair work has been going on here and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 extends late into the night. The noise from the heavy machines is causing inconvenience to me as well
 as to other residents in the neighborhood, and as a result
, we are unable to sleep at night. Moreover
, there are students living in the area who are unable to study as they have their exams coming up.

I would like to suggest that you employ additional workers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accelerate
speed up
 the repair process and strictly
 confine the work to daytime as most of the residents and students are in their offices and schools. I hope the issue will be resolved
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely


Will Smith

IELTS letter Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

173 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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