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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem g5ypA
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the disturbance caused by the ongoing road repair work in our locality. My name is Will Smith and I am a resident of Hillsborough Street on the Lake Tahoe. I have been living in this area for the last ten years. For the past few days, a lot of road repair work has been going on here and it sometimes extends late into the night. The noise from the heavy machines is causing inconvenience to me as well as to other residents in the neighborhood, and as a result, we are unable to sleep at night. Moreover, there are students living in the area who are unable to study as they have their exams coming up. I would like to suggest that you employ additional workers to speed up the repair process and strictly confine the work to daytime as most of the residents and students are in their offices and schools. I hope the issue will be resolved soon. Yours sincerely Will Smith
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to draw your attention to the disturbance caused by the ongoing road repair work in our locality. My name is Will
Smith and
I am a resident of Hillsborough Street on the Lake Tahoe. I have been living in this area for the last ten years.

For the past few days,
a lot of
road repair work has been going on here and it
sometimes
extends late into the night. The noise from the heavy machines is causing inconvenience to me
as well
as to other residents in the neighborhood, and
as a result
, we are unable to sleep at night.
Moreover
, there are students living in the area who are unable to study as they have their exams coming up.

I would like to suggest that you employ additional workers to
speed up
the repair process and
strictly
confine the work to daytime as most of the residents and students are in their offices and schools. I hope the issue will
be resolved
soon
.

Yours
sincerely


Will Smith
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IELTS letter Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

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  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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