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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, PGY2
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to complain about the service that I received at you eating establishment. My name is Zoya and I went to your restaurant with my family last Monday on my mother's birthday. As my mother is on vegan diet so, I searched for that kind of store and I found your place. In the beginning everything was amazing as the broccoli soup was delicious and starters were also beyond imagination. Moreover, staff was also well- mannered. Things became wrong where we found a bone in our side sauce which was quite unacceptable while we were supposed to get all vegan things. Thanks to god, my mother did not eat that sauce. Lastly, I would like to get full refund for that meal and as well as the medical bills that will occur with the check up of my mother to make sure she did not have any contamination of chicken in food. I hope you will understand this entire situation and take any serious action to prevent this from not happening again. Regards Zoya
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to complain about the service that I received at you eating establishment. My name is
Zoya
and I went to your restaurant with my family last Monday on my mother's birthday. As my mother is on vegan diet
so
, I searched for that kind of store and I found your place.

In the beginning everything was amazing as the broccoli soup was delicious and starters were
also
beyond imagination.
Moreover
, staff was
also
well- mannered. Things became
wrong
where we found a bone in our side sauce which was quite unacceptable while we
were supposed
to
get
all vegan things. Thanks to god, my mother did not eat that sauce.

Lastly
, I would like to
get
full refund for that meal and
as well
as the medical bills that will occur with the
check
up of my mother to
make
sure she did not have any contamination of chicken in food.

I hope you will understand this entire situation and take any serious action to
prevent
this from not happening again.

Regards

Zoya
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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