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You took your family to a nearby restaurant.You were disappointed with the meal and service

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Dear sir or madamI am afraid to say I have numbers of complaints to restaurant manager. I had faced a problem with food and service. I took my family to a nearby restaurant on the 17 th November 2021. Because this day was my brother's birthday. We ordered meal it was vegetarian dish. we received the menu on time, but unfortunately it was not food like I preferred it seemed like non- vegetarian. Although I asked waiter about it but he did not reply in a good manner and after a long discussion they confirmed that there were no options available for me currently. I have a suggestion for you in order to improve meal service. First of all, your waiters to speak politely and there should be a person who checks the meal options thank you for your consideration. Your faithfull.
Dear sir or
madamI
am afraid to say I have numbers of complaints to restaurant manager. I had faced a problem with food and service. I took my family to a nearby restaurant on the
17 th
November 2021.
Because
this day was my brother's birthday. We ordered meal it was vegetarian dish.
we
received the menu on time,
but
unfortunately it was not food like I preferred it seemed like non- vegetarian. Although I asked waiter about it
but
he did not reply in a
good
manner and after a long discussion they confirmed that there were no options available for me
currently
. I have a suggestion for you in order to
improve
meal service.
First of all
, your waiters to speak
politely
and there should be a person who
checks
the meal options thank you for your consideration. Your
faithfull
.
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and service

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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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