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In your letter, describe what you like about the library, say what you don’t like, make suggestions for improvements

In your letter, describe what you like about the library, say what you don’t like, make suggestions for improvements QKA6K
Dear Sir Thanks so much for your interest in my propositions. It is very important to me have the opportunity can give you some ideas about services and facilities you provide. From the moment I received your request las week I was thinking about what was the feeling I remember when my mother and father took me to visit this community library for first time. Forever activities like reading competition have been one of my favorite and multimedia section has an exceptional selection of natural preservation and endangered species. Furthermore, internet access has great quality. I used to visit your library twice a week, sometimes the staff who works on desk near the main entrance is very busy and people wait long for return books, in fact nobody like wasting time in line. Find an automatic way where library material could be borrowed and returned it would help for the circulation desk. Other situation can help installation is renew toilets for member with disabilities in particular water closet. I hope my comments can help you Regards,
Dear Sir

Thanks
so
much for your interest in my propositions. It is
very
important
to me have the opportunity can give you
some
ideas
about services and facilities you provide.

From the moment I received your request
las
week I was thinking about what was the feeling I remember when my mother and father took me to visit this community library for
first
time. Forever activities like reading competition have been one of my favorite and multimedia section has an exceptional selection of natural preservation and endangered species.
Furthermore
, internet access has great quality.

I
used
to visit your library twice a week,
sometimes
the staff who works on desk near the main entrance is
very
busy and
people
wait long for return books, in fact nobody like wasting time in line.

Find an automatic way where library material could
be borrowed
and returned it would
help
for the circulation desk.

Other situation can
help
installation is renew toilets for member with disabilities
in particular
water closet.

I hope my comments can
help
you

Regards,
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IELTS letter In your letter, describe what you like about the library, say what you don’t like, make suggestions for improvements

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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