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Write a letter to your friend giving him instructions how to take care of your dog.

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Dear John I hope you are doing well, and I would like to thank you once more for looking after my lovely dog while I’m abroad. Please give my puppy, jack, breakfast around nine in the morning. His bawls are on the fridge and his food is inside it. You could bring him for a morning walk as well, there is a small park near my house, it won’t take a long, twenty minutes is enough. Normally jack takes his lunch about one in the afternoon and dinner around eight in the evening. In between you can give him some snacks. That’s it, jack needs mostly love and some time to spend with. Hope to see you very soon and thank you very much for taking care of him. Warm wishes Dimitris
Dear John

I hope you are doing well, and I would like to thank you once more for looking after my lovely dog while I’m abroad.

Please
give my puppy, jack, breakfast around nine in the morning. His bawls are on the fridge and his food is inside it. You could bring him for a morning walk
as well
, there is a
small
park near my
house
, it won’t take a long, twenty minutes is
enough
.

Normally
jack takes his lunch about one in the afternoon and dinner around eight in the evening. In between you can give him
some
snacks.

That’s it, jack needs
mostly
love
and
some
time to spend with. Hope to
see
you
very
soon
and thank you
very
much for taking care of him.

Warm wishes

Dimitris
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend giving him instructions how to take care of your dog.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
131 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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