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missed a flight due to security 1. what 2. why happened 3. what to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my discontent and discomfort resulted in missing my flight today to Mumbai. It is a lot disappointing that the security breaches of your company, have hindered my flight from travelling for an important meeting organized. The database have been compromised and no other passenger booked at that hour was not able to board. In addition, there was no next flight to catch up and when got a chance to book the later one, the system was not prompted making the situation even worse. This is a lot disappointing and never expected from such a renowned company like yours. I had to cancel my trip which concluded to a huge loss to my company as well as an individual. I strongly advise you to establish a powerful cyber security along with the training experts to ensure that this circumstances are never repeated and no other individual need to go through this hassle. It would be appreciated if you help me with lodging and get the charges refunded for all the loss i went through. I hope to hear back from you soon. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my discontent and discomfort resulted in missing my flight
today
to Mumbai.

It is a lot disappointing that the security breaches of your
company
, have hindered my flight from travelling for an
important
meeting organized.

The database have
been compromised
and no other passenger booked at that hour was not able to board.
In addition
, there was
no
next
flight to catch up and when
got
a chance to book the later one, the system was not prompted making the situation even worse.

This is a lot disappointing and never
expected
from such a renowned
company
like yours. I had to cancel my trip which concluded to a huge loss to my
company
as well
as an individual.

I
strongly
advise you to establish a powerful cyber security along with the training experts to ensure that
this
circumstances are never repeated and no other individual need to go through this hassle. It would
be appreciated
if you
help
me with lodging and
get
the charges refunded for all the loss
i
went through.

I hope to hear back from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter missed a flight due to security 1. what 2. why happened 3. what to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
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