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Internet is important part of life ?Are you agree or not agree explain this.

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My name is Rajesh and I am one of the students who joined your course recently. I am writing this letter to let you know that I cannot pursue the course further as I was offered a job at a well known company. Let me explain the situation in detail. Actually, I have been attending several interviews recently, but none of them were succeeded. Therefore, I lost my hope and opted for the course at your institute. Fortunately, I received a job offer yesterday from one of those companies. I was really thrilled and excited about it. Furthermore, my office timings are from 9amto evening 6 pm. Therefore, It is a tedious task to balance both of them parlerly. Therefore, I can't continue my course further, I hope you understand my situation in this regard. I sincerely apologize for

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