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Write a letter to a television company congratulating them on tv program that you have recently seen. Write a letter to the television company. In your letter -Mention when and why you watched it -Say why you liked it so much -What effect it might have on other people.

Write a letter to a television company congratulating them on tv program that you have recently seen. Write a letter to the television company. In your letter -Mention when and why you watched it -Say why you liked it so much -What effect it might have on other people. qV1O5
I am writing to congratulate the respected authorities, after being enthralled by a television programme; Easy Yoga, which has been recently started by your company. Personally, I have liked it so much. Actually, I was suffering from the back pain and I had consulted all the doctors but, unfortunately, all my efforts had gone into vain. But, last week when I saw an advertisement of your TV programme; Easy Yoga, I could not resist myself from watching ir. Within seven days, my back pain has just miraculously vanished. The most impressive thing about this programme is, the lucidly explaining technique of every yoga posture and also the timings of this programme is seven in the morning which is suitable for everyone. For every age group person, be it a child or an adult, this show has something lucrative to learn. Feeling very happy from your show, I have no reluctance to say that, this programme has proved that it is the health which is the real wealth. Once again deepest congratulations.
I am writing to congratulate the respected authorities, after
being enthralled
by a television
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programme
; Easy Yoga, which has been recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
by your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
Personally
, I have liked it
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so
much.

Actually, I was suffering from the back pain and I had consulted all the doctors
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
, unfortunately, all my efforts had gone into vain.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, last week when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
an
The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?
advertisement of
your TV
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programme
; Easy Yoga, I could not resist myself from watching
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ir
. Within seven days, my back pain has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
miraculously
vanished. The most impressive thing about this
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
is, the
lucidly
explaining technique of every yoga posture and
also
the timings of this
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
is seven in the morning which is suitable for everyone.

For every age group person, be it a child or an adult, this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
has something lucrative to learn. Feeling
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
happy from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
, I have no reluctance to say that, this
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
has proved that it is the health which is the real wealth. Once again
A determiner is probably missing here: "the deepest".
deepest
congratulations.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a television company congratulating them on tv program that you have recently seen. Write a letter to the television company. In your letter -Mention when and why you watched it -Say why you liked it so much -What effect it might have on other people.

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