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Write a letter to an electronic company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items The price and availability of the new camera The exact size and special functions the set have

Write a letter to an electronic company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items The price and availability of the new camera The exact size and special functions the set have PVk62
Dear Sir or Madam, Greeting’s of the day! Through this letter, I want to express my interest in buying your latest digital camera, which is being advertised by your company as per the circular in 20th Septemper’s daily, ‘Times of India’ newspaper. Undoubtedly, your company not inly sell best camera’s in the market but also offer them at reasonable prices. Despite the fact that, there was only launch date mentioned in the newspaper, no orher information about the product. So, I want to obtain all the necessary details about the camera. Firstly, could you please provide the details of price along with the availability of this model in toue authorised stores? If this model is not available immediately, than please confirm me how many days it will take after ordering it. Secondly, neither there was any details regarding rhe aize nor the functions in the newspaper. Would tpu send me a broucher of this model in my mail? By doing so, I will be able to know about the exact size as well as its special features. I am lookig forward to hear from tpu as soon as possible, as I am very keen to prder this camera. Yours faithfully, Manjit kaur
Dear Sir or Madam,

Greeting’s of the day!

Through this letter, I want to express my interest in buying your latest digital camera, which is
being advertised
by your
company
as per the circular in 20th
Septemper
’s daily, ‘Times of India’ newspaper.

Undoubtedly
, your
company
not
inly
sell best
camera’s in the market
but
also
offer them at reasonable prices. Despite the fact that, there was
only
launch date mentioned in the newspaper, no
orher
information about the product.
So
, I want to obtain all the necessary
details
about the camera.
Firstly
, could you
please
provide the
details
of price along with the availability of this model in
toue
authorised
stores? If this model is not available immediately,
than
please
confirm me how
many
days it will take after ordering it.

Secondly
, neither there was any
details
regarding
rhe
aize
nor the functions in the newspaper. Would
tpu
send
me a
broucher
of this model in my mail? By doing
so
, I will be able to know about the exact size
as well
as its special features.

I am
lookig
forward to hear from
tpu
as
soon
as possible, as I am
very
keen to
prder
this camera.

Yours
faithfully
,

Manjit
kaur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an electronic company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items The price and availability of the new camera The exact size and special functions the set have

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  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
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