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LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. dopWr
Dear Mr. Gab The purpose of this letter is to convey to you my sincere apologies for submitting your assignment late. I know it’s important to submit the homework on time. I had realized how much this has inconvenienced you and how angry you must have been. I’m going to have a mid-term physics test on the next week. This is the most difficult subject to me. Therefore, I had spending the whole week to relearn it from the beginning. I supposed to have studied it from the previous week. Just yesterday, my best friend had asked me if I had done your assignment. At that time, I realized I had completely forgot the assignment you had given us. I immediately did the assignment and handed in it late. There is simple no acceptable reason for my tardiness. I know this was completely my fault. Please accept my most sincere apology for submitting the homework late. I deeply promise this won’t repeat again. I hope that you will kindly accept my apology and give me another chance.
Dear Mr. Gab

The purpose of this letter is to convey to you my sincere apologies for submitting your
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assignment
late.

I know it’s
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important
to submit the homework on time. I had realized how much this has inconvenienced you and how angry you
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must
have been.
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I
’m going to have a mid-term physics
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test
on the
next
week. This is the most difficult subject to me.
Therefore
, I had spending the whole week to relearn it from the beginning. I supposed to have studied it from the previous week.
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Just
yesterday, my best friend had asked me if I had done your
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assignment
. At that time, I realized I had completely
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forgot
the
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assignment
you had
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given
us. I immediately did the
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assignment
and handed in it late. There is simple no acceptable reason for my tardiness. I know this was completely my fault.

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Please
accept my most sincere apology for submitting the homework late. I
deeply
promise this won’t
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repeat again
. I hope that you will kindly accept my apology and give me another chance.

IELTS letter LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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