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You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there.

You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. LrOy6

Dear Jae Anne, Hope you are doing well and having the time of your life this summer. I would like to thank you for letting me spend my weekend off over at your house. I had the most wonderful time! You do have a lovely home. I especially liked that extensive Greek Mythology collection you have at your library. Excellent taste, my friend. I could not thank you enough for opening your doors for me. Should you have the time, I would like to invite you over to my place next weekend, I will be whipping up your favorite dish of mine. Cebu sure is a good spot for an impulsive shopper like me. I ended up buying more than what I could carry. I even came across this really cute watch when I was strolling about at Ayala Center Cebu. Do you remember the Baby-G watch that I was eyeing the last time we window-shopped together? I ended up buying it. I figured, why not just buy it so I would finally stop thinking about it? I walked so much that day that as soon as I got back to your place, I just went straight to bed. The next morning though, I was in such a hurry that I haphazardly packed my things. Guess what happened next? I left my watch on your dressing table. I did not take it out of the box yet so I am sure that you would be able to identify it once you enter your room. If it is not much trouble, can I ask you to bring the watch over with you when you come to my place next weekend? I absolutely cannot wait to see you. Love, Karen

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 of your life this summer. I would like to thank you for letting me spend my weekend off over at your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. I had the most wonderful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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! You do have a lovely home. I especially
 liked that extensive Greek Mythology collection you have at your library. Excellent taste, my friend. I could not thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for opening your doors for me. Should you have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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, I would like to invite you over to my place You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 weekend, I will be whipping up your favorite dish of mine.

Cebu sure is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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watch
 when I was strolling about at Ayala Center Cebu. Do you remember the Baby-G You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 that I was eyeing the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 we window-shopped together? I ended up buying it. I figured, why not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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buy
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so
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 thinking about it?

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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so
 much that day that as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
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got
 back to your place, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 went straight to bed. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 morning though, I was in such a hurry that I haphazardly
 packed my things. Guess what happened You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
? I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 on your dressing table. I did not take it out of the box yet
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so
 I am sure that you would be able to identify it once you enter your room.

If it is not much trouble, can I ask you to bring the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 over with you when you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to my place You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 weekend?

I absolutely
 cannot wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Karen