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Letter to a neighbor. Invite him to a party

Letter to a neighbor. Invite him to a party XGOQA

Dear Mr. Smith My name is Eugene, I have come from Ukraine and my family and I have become your new neighbors. Me and my family have bought this is gorgeous green house in front of your spectacular home. My family and me are newcomers in this district and frankly speaking, have not known in person with most of living here people, but want to join local community and create a friendly relationship. For this reason, I am about to take a party for all who living in our amassing Sherwood area at nearest Friday evening. I hope during this event a lot of people will have visiting my home an I can meet they in person, also in the same time hot appetizers, music, soft and alcoholic drinks will contribute to fun and welcoming environment. However, I really live through that noise on this party can be a quote loud and it will bother you. I consider that we can find an undoubted easy way to avoid this situation – join us. I really want your family and you became a part of this party get relax and fun during all evening. I will be waiting for you on Friday 15, at 6 p. m. Yours sincerely Eugene

Dear Mr. Smith

My name is Eugene, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from Ukraine and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 and I have become your new neighbors. When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 this is gorgeous green This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in front of your spectacular home.

My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 and Did you mean "I"?I
me
 are newcomers in this district and frankly
 speaking, have not known in person with Consider using "most living" or "most of the living".most livingmost of the living
most of living
 here This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 local community and create a friendly relationship. For this reason
, I am about to take a party for all who living in our amassing Sherwood area at nearest Friday evening. I hope during this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will have visiting my home Possible typo. Did you mean "an" or "I"?anI
an I
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 they in person, also
 in the same time hot appetizers, music, soft and alcoholic drinks will contribute to fun and welcoming environment.

However
, I really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 through that noise on this party can be a quote loud and it will bother you. I consider that we can find an undoubted easy way to avoid this situation Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us. I really
 want your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 and you became a part of this party This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 relax and fun during all evening. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will be waiting for you on Friday 15, at 6 p. m.

Yours sincerely


Eugene