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Writing Evaluation-1.1 About a place to visit

Writing Evaluation-1. 1 About a place to visit pRq8D

Hi Peter, I am Happy to share that I moved from Cognizant to Infosys Company for a better career opportunity. I was working as accountant in Cognizant but my aspiration is to work as Automation engineer and moved the same role in Infosys. My new role is to eliminate the unwanted process in the operation system and to reduce the process time. This process will save company cost as well as the human work. Last week we had a family visit to Australia for summer vacation and we had enjoyed the places around the Sydney city. Without any reservation Sydney will be perfect for our upcoming tour with our college friends, however you can check our friends with their opinions. I am really excited to see you all in the up-coming tour. By the way my daughter is going to celebrate her first anniversary and we have plans to make it memorable in the Emirates hotel on coming 25th. Please accept our invitation to come and join the part with your family members, where there will a chance to interact with my local friends. kindly let me know your plans and allow me to book flight tickets for your family. With love,

Hi Peter,

I am Happy to share that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from Cognizant to Possible spelling mistake found.InformsInfusesInfests
Infosys
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
 for a better career opportunity. I was working as accountant in Cognizant This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my aspiration is to work as Automation engineer and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 the same role in Possible spelling mistake found.InformsInfusesInfests
Infosys
.

My new role is to eliminate the unwanted process in the The word 'operation' doesn't fit in this context.operating system
operation system
 and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the process time. This process will save This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 cost as well
 as the human work.

Last week we had a family visit to Australia for summer Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).vacation, and
vacation and
 we had enjoyed the places around the Sydney city. Without any reservation Sydney will be perfect for our upcoming tour with our college friends, however
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 our friends with their opinions. I am really
 excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you all in the up-coming tour. By the way my daughter is going to celebrate her first
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).anniversary, and
anniversary and
 we have plans to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it memorable in the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "Emirates'" or "emirate's"?Emirates'Emirate's
Emirates
 hotel on coming 25th. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept our invitation to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the part with your family members, where there will a chance to interact with my local friends. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterKindly
kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your plans and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to book flight tickets for your family.

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, 