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write a letter to your manager to tell him/her about some company docjments that you lost while travelling with them.Please say - 1. What were the documents ?, Where and when did you travel with them?, Suggest a solution for this situation

write a letter to your manager to tell him/her about some company docjments that you lost while travelling with them. Please say - 1. What were the documents? , Where and when did you travel with them? , Suggest a solution for this situation e5BoA
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that i have lost the valuation report of the krafton company's properties. This was the vital documents of my discussion woth client regarding its loan proposal. Yesterday, When i was waiting in client's office reception area for his arrival, I realised that report is missing. However, I did a thorough check but i was failed find it. Since, the director had to go for some personal reasons, the meeting has been postponed for next monday. Now, I think the only solution is to get xerox from central vault where every document of our cases is stored. I would request you to please contact Mr. Bean, the head of vault department so that report could be made available as early as possible. Waiting for your prompt action and reply. Yours sincerly, Steve
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that
i
have lost the valuation report of the
krafton
company
's properties. This was the vital documents of my discussion
woth
client regarding its loan proposal. Yesterday, When
i
was waiting in client's office reception area for his arrival, I
realised
that report is missing.
However
, I did a thorough
check
but
i
was failed
find it. Since, the director had to go for
some
personal reasons, the meeting has
been postponed
for
next
monday
.
Now
, I
think
the
only
solution is to
get
xerox from central vault where every document of our cases
is stored
. I would request you to
please
contact Mr. Bean, the head of vault department
so
that report could
be made
available as early as possible.

Waiting for your prompt action and reply. Yours
sincerly
,
Steve
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IELTS letter write a letter to your manager to tell him/her about some company docjments that you lost while travelling with them. Please say - 1. What were the documents? , Where and when did you travel with them? , Suggest a solution for this situation

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
140 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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