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Your grandparents are planning a family gathering. They want to have a fun weekend somewhere. You know a perfect place to have the event. Write them an email and include the following things: • Tell them about the place you have in mind. • Talk about your experiences at the place. • Describe what the family can do there.

Your grandparents are planning a family gathering. They want to have a fun weekend somewhere. You know a perfect place to have the event. Write them an email and include the following things: • Tell them about the place you have in mind. • Talk about your experiences at the place. • Describe what the family can do there. WyO1e
Hi grandma and grandpa, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this email in regards to the family gathering you are planning for this weekend. I have a place in mind, which would be great for family outings. Last year I went to a farmhouse with my friends which is about 30km from the city. It is located in the middle of the forest with lots of greenery. I liked the place because there is a lot we can do as a family. The farmhouse has 8 bedrooms, a swimming pool, trekking, and a big space for barbeque. As we are a big family, having so many bedrooms will be a very convenient place to live for the weekend. Moreover, as mentioned before there are many things we can do as a family. I hope you find this place good. Also, as a family, we can enjoy and have fun. So should I book this farmhouse for this weekend? Looking forward to hearing from you. With love, Sam
Hi grandma and grandpa,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this email
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things we can do as a family.

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, as a
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, we can enjoy and have fun.
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should I book this farmhouse for this weekend?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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Sam
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IELTS letter Your grandparents are planning a family gathering. They want to have a fun weekend somewhere. You know a perfect place to have the event. Write them an email and include the following things: • Tell them about the place you have in mind. • Talk about your experiences at the place. • Describe what the family can do there.

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