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Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement

Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement BJX9p
Dear Sir or Madam, Being a loyal client of “Alkuba” restaurant, I am writing to commend you on the exceptional service the restaurant offers the residents and guests of Calgary. To begin with, I must say that not only the dishes are extremely delicious but also their design is interesting and attractive. Personally, I really enjoy your vegetarian steak with salad which is both tasty and healthy. Secondly, I am impressed by how approachable and helpful the restaurant staff is. They always show the willing to help with any request I have during my visit. Moreover, the waiters are very knowledgeable about the composition of each meal provided in the menu. Additionally, I really appreciate the fact that there is an option of a personalised meal which is vitally important for people with food allergy or any other food restrictions. There is, however, one suggestion that I would like to submit which I believe would further improve the restaurant service. It would be really great for working people as myself to enjoy the opportunity of address delivery of restaurant dishes. Especially it applies in peak hours such as lunch or dinner time when the places to dine in are limited or unavailable. I do really believe that delivery service will be really beneficial in terms of improvement of the restaurant standards. Once again, I would like to congratulate you on the very high level of service in “Alkuba” restaurant, and wish a business success to you and your staff. Yours faithfully, Olga Yatsenko
Dear Sir or Madam,

Being a loyal client of “
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Alkuba
”
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restaurant
, I am writing to commend you on the exceptional
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service
the
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restaurant
offers the residents and guests of Calgary.

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with, I
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say that not
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only
the dishes are
extremely
delicious
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but
also
their design is interesting and attractive.
Personally
, I
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really
enjoy your vegetarian steak with salad which is both tasty and healthy.

Secondly
, I
am impressed
by how approachable and helpful the
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restaurant
staff is. They always
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show
the willing to
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help
with any request I have during my visit.
Moreover
, the waiters are
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very
knowledgeable about the composition of each meal provided in the menu.
Additionally
, I
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really
appreciate the fact that there is an option of a
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personalised
meal which is
vitally
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important
for
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people
with food allergy or any other food restrictions.

There is,
however
, one suggestion that I would like to submit which I believe would
further
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improve
the
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restaurant
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service
. It would be
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really
great for working
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people
as myself to enjoy the opportunity of address delivery of
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restaurant
dishes.
Especially
it applies in peak hours such as lunch or dinner time when the places to dine in
are limited
or unavailable. I do
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really
believe that delivery
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service
will be
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really
beneficial in terms of improvement of the
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restaurant
standards.

Once again, I would like to congratulate you on the
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very
high level of
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service
in “
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Alkuba
”
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restaurant
, and wish a business success to you and your staff.

Yours
faithfully
,

Olga
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Yatsenko
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement

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8 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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