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write a letter to the friend and demand a computer course; why you need it, How it will help you, How it send it to you

write a letter to the friend and demand a computer course; why you need it, How it will help you, How it send it to you RNdlp

Dear Suresh, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. It has been so long since we met. I'm writing this letter to request you to download a free online computer course and send it to me. I need 'MS office certification programmed' for my brother. As he promote in class 11th however, in this Covid pandemic everywhere is lockdown consequently, he is not able to attend the school. Moreover, he can utilize his free time to learn something new. As he is planning to go abroad after completion his 12th and there is a lots of IT companies and they demand for the employs who has vast knowledge of computers. Moreover they give telephone figure salary to their staff. I hope you help me in this endeavor. I would like to suggest the ways by which you can send the course to me. First by google drive or secondly install it to pen-drive and deliver it to my home via courier. However, you are master in this and knows better than me. Hoping for a positive response from you. Lots of love,

Dear Suresh,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. It has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long since we met. I'm writing this letter to request you to download a free online computer course and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 it to me.

I need 'MS office certification programmed' for my brother. As he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "promotes", "promoted".promotespromoted
promote
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 11th however
, in this Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid
 pandemic everywhere is lockdown consequently
, he is not able to attend the school. Moreover
, he can utilize his free time to learn something new.

As he is planning to go abroad after completion his 12th and Did you mean "there are a lots"?there are a lots
there is a lots
 of IT Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).companies, and
companies and
 they demand for the employs who Did you mean "have", "haven"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'employs' should be used.havehaven
has
 vast knowledge of computers. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 they give telephone figure salary to their staff. I hope you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in this endeavor.

I would like to suggest the ways by which you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the course to me. First
 by Did you mean "Google Drive"?Google Drive
google drive
 or secondly
 install it to pen-drive and deliver it to my home via courier. However
, you are master in this and knows better than me. Hoping for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from you.

Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, 