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You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: - Thank your friend - Describe your watch - Tell them what you want them to do

You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: - Thank your friend - Describe your watch - Tell them what you want them to do 2VM6
Dear Dave, Hope you are fine. I just wanted to ask if I left my watch at your place. Hey buddy thanks for the party last weekend. It was a blast, and we hadn’t had such a party for a long time. I not only enjoyed the food made by your mom especially that chicken pasta but also the desserts were tasty. I think that I lost my watch in your house. Unfortunately, as usual I removed it and lost. As far as I remember, while having shower, I took it off and forgo. It is a silver colour fossil watch with black dial, and it has silver outer frame. Can you please look for me over your place? If you find it, send in courier to my address if possible. If not, Rahul will be visiting me soon so you can hand it over to him in case if you do not have time to go to the post office. Write back to me soon, Best regards, Sahil
Dear Dave,

Hope you are fine. I
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just
wanted to ask if I
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left
my
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watch
at your place.

Hey buddy thanks for the party last weekend. It was a blast, and we hadn’t had such a party for a long time. I not
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only
enjoyed the food made by your mom
especially
that chicken pasta
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but
also
the desserts were tasty.

I
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think
that I lost my
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watch
in your
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house
. Unfortunately, as usual I removed it and lost. As far as I remember, while having shower, I took it off and forgo. It is a silver
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colour
fossil
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watch
with black dial, and it has silver outer frame.

Can you
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please
look for me over your place? If you find it,
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send
in courier to my address if possible. If not, Rahul will be visiting me
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soon
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so
you can hand it over to him in case if you do not have time to go to the post office.

Write back to me
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soon
,

Best regards,

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Sahil

IELTS letter You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: - Thank your friend - Describe your watch - Tell them what you want them to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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