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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, EKBq

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to explain about the accommodation problems which I am facing. I am sharing a small room with a fellow student, we have a bunk bed and only one work desk. The room is not spacious enough to include any extra furniture. Since we have one work desk, we usually argue over who will get to use it. I occasionally have to work late at night or have to get up early, around 4: 00 am so that I can complete my written assignments, this is the time when my room mate is sleeping and I get the chance to use the desk. Due to the uncomforable working hours I am not getting enough sleep and sometimes doze of in class. The lumpy mattress makes it difficult to work on the bed. It is requested to please provide us separate accommodations or a bigger room so that we can each have our own work desk. Thank you, Regards Ameen Sheikh

Dear Sir or Madam,

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enough
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uncomforable
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enough
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 on the bed.

It is requested
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please
 provide us separate accommodations or a bigger You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
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 that we can each have our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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work
 desk.

Thank you,

Regards

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