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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child KgE3

Dear Sir or Madam, I am supremely excited after reading about your advertisement in Australian Magazine this week and would like to express my interest for the same. I am 27 years mature Software developer named DishaTeli from Melbourne. I am currently working as a free lancer developer since last 2 years. Though I enjoy my current job of designing applications, I'm looking for a part time job that gives me joy and reduces my interaction with machines. I love spending time with kids. In fact, In my past time, I play with my friend's kids and they love me too. My friend's often ask me how do I be so friendly with kids and handle them with ease, especially the cranky ones and my reply is "just be patient". I'm sure your kid will love spending time with me too and I can assure you to take his/her good care. As I already mentioned about my free lancing job, I would like to continue with it in my free time and as it is free lancing, the job times are quite flexible so you need not worry about me handling multiple things. I can also help your kid with his/her homework as I was good at academics myself and love teaching others. I hope you will consider my application and understand my interest in this wonderful opportunity. Looking forward to hear from you. Regards, Disha Teli

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 from you.

Regards,

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