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you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college . in the letter, * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation do you prefer

you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter, * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation do you prefer 6AW8
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am not satisfied with my current living conditions. The accommodation itself is very good but I have problem with my housemate because I am getting alot of problems while working in his presence. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started when my new housemate moved in before that everything was good as my old housemate was considerate. Almost everyday he wakes up till late and plays very loud music which don't even let me sleep and also disturbs my studies. would you kindly change my housemate or transfer me to any other room. I would prefer to live with person who is much quitter. So, that I can also focus on my studies and has pleasent sleep. Thank you for your considerationYour faithfully, ishika
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
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my situation. The trouble
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when my new housemate
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that everything was
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as my
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housemate was considerate. Almost everyday he wakes up till late and plays
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very
loud music which don't even
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me sleep and
also
disturbs my studies.
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would
you kindly
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change
my housemate or transfer me to any other room. I would prefer to
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live
with person who is much quitter.
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, that I can
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focus on my studies and has
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pleasent
sleep. Thank you for your
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IELTS letter you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter, * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation do you prefer

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