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you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college . in the letter, * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation do you prefer

you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter, * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation do you prefer 6AW8
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am not satisfied with my current living conditions. The accommodation itself is very good but I have problem with my housemate because I am getting alot of problems while working in his presence. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started when my new housemate moved in before that everything was good as my old housemate was considerate. Almost everyday he wakes up till late and plays very loud music which don't even let me sleep and also disturbs my studies. would you kindly change my housemate or transfer me to any other room. I would prefer to live with person who is much quitter. So, that I can also focus on my studies and has pleasent sleep. Thank you for your considerationYour faithfully, ishika
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
let
you know that I am not satisfied with my
current
living conditions. The accommodation itself is
very
good
but
I have problem with my housemate
because
I am getting
alot
of problems while working in his presence.
Let
me
explain
my situation. The trouble
started
when my new housemate
moved
in
before
that everything was
good
as my
old
housemate was considerate. Almost everyday he wakes up till late and plays
very
loud music which don't even
let
me sleep and
also
disturbs my studies.
would
you kindly
change
my housemate or transfer me to any other room. I would prefer to
live
with person who is much quitter.
So
, that I can
also
focus on my studies and has
pleasent
sleep. Thank you for your
considerationYour
faithfully
,
ishika
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IELTS letter you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter, * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation do you prefer

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  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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