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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer 2VLo
I am a student of your college and also live in your hostel room I am a decent and topper student of your college. In these days, I face many difficulties regarding my accommodation. I share my room with another student. However, he wakes up early and used to sing every morning which disturbs my sleep. He uses washroom first and take too much time. So, I'm going late to college every day. He used full closet for his clothes whereas I have a tiny shelf to keep my stuff. he drinking every day and he come very late so I am not force on my study every day i lost my study day by day i prefer another room doesn't matter room big or small. I need accommodation for myself where I can live alone and last thing I need room on ground floor.
I am a student of your college and
also
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live
in your hostel
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room
I am a decent and topper student of your college. In these days, I face
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many
difficulties regarding my accommodation. I share my
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room
with another student.
However
, he wakes up early and
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used
to sing every morning which disturbs my sleep. He
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uses
washroom
first
and take too much time.
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So
, I'm going late to college every day. He
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used
full closet for his clothes whereas I have a tiny shelf to
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keep
my stuff.
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he
drinking every
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day and
he
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come
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very
late
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so
I am not
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force
on my study every day
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i
lost my study day by day
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i
prefer another
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room
doesn't matter
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room
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big
or
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small
. I need accommodation for myself where I can
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live
alone and last thing I need
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room
on
This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?
ground floor
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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