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You stayed in a hotel recently and would like to write a letter to the manager explaining how much you enjoyed your stay. Write a letter to the manager

You stayed in a hotel recently and would like to write a letter to the manager explaining how much you enjoyed your stay. Write a letter to the manager Y2p55
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my appreciation for the excellent service and care you and your staff provided us during my family’s stay at Lost Paradise Hotel from May 25 to 31, 2021. It was my family’s first out of the country vacation and I wanted it to be perfect. Your staff made this possible. Your hotel’s service was superb. You have given us no room for complaints - from the time you picked us up at the airport up to the last day of our stay. When we arrived at your hotel, our bags and luggage were brought immediately to our room. The breakfast buffet which was included in the package was great and there were plenty of foods to choose from. Even my son who is a picky-eater did not have a hard time choosing the food that he wanted. The recreational facilities at the hotel made our stay more enjoyable. My husband and I specifically enjoyed the gym and the massage services while my son had a blast in your kid’s playroom. I also have to mention the staff who were all very attentive of our needs. We had a wonderful one-week vacation and staying in your hotel definitely enhanced our travel experience. Thus, we already have decided to return to your hotel for our next vacation, which will be next year. I also recommended Lost Paradise Hotel to my friends and relatives. Thank you again for your outstanding service and I wish you best of luck in your business. Yours faithfully, Yanna Machica
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my appreciation for the excellent
service
and care you and your staff provided us during my family’s stay at Lost Paradise
Hotel
from May 25 to 31, 2021. It was my family’s
first
out of the country vacation and I wanted it to be perfect. Your staff made this possible.

Your
hotel’s
service
was superb. You have
given
us no room for complaints
-
from the time you picked us up at the airport up to the last day of our stay. When we arrived at your
hotel
, our bags and luggage
were brought
immediately to our room. The breakfast buffet which
was included
in the package was great and there were
plenty
of foods to choose from. Even my son who is a picky-eater did not have a
hard
time choosing the food that he wanted. The recreational facilities at the
hotel
made our stay more enjoyable. My husband and I
specifically
enjoyed the gym and the massage
services
while my son had a blast in your kid’s playroom. I
also
have to
mention the staff who were all
very
attentive of our needs.

We had a wonderful one-week vacation and staying in your
hotel
definitely enhanced our travel experience.
Thus
, we already have decided to return to your
hotel
for our
next
vacation, which will be
next
year. I
also
recommended Lost Paradise
Hotel
to my friends and relatives.

Thank you again for your outstanding
service
and I wish you best of luck in your business.

Yours
faithfully
,

Yanna
Machica
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IELTS letter You stayed in a hotel recently and would like to write a letter to the manager explaining how much you enjoyed your stay. Write a letter to the manager

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  American English
7 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
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