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You have been on holiday abroad Write describing your holiday to your parents

You have been on holiday abroad Write describing your holiday to your parents dqRNd
Dear parents I felt obliged to write to uniform you have everything is going here in Korea since I started my summer holidays. Please accept my sincere appologies for not writing sooner but Iʼve been so busy I really havenʼt had enough time. I managed to find a nice house to spent my summer holiday. Itʼs a small house just around the forest from the town. Iʼm sharing the house with a boy who came from England and has been here for a month. I have a became familiar with my neighbours and have been practising my favourite hobby is walking, which is important for my health. I have to return home for the next Sunday. It will wonderful to see everyone again. I do get homesick, you know I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely Farhod.
Dear parents

I felt obliged to write to uniform you have everything is going here in Korea since I
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started
my summer holidays.
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Please
accept my sincere
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appologies
for not writing sooner
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but
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Iʼve
been
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so
busy I
really
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havenʼt
had
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enough
time.

I managed to find a nice
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house
to spent my summer holiday.
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Itʼs
a
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small
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house
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just
around the forest from the town.
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Iʼm
sharing the
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house
with a boy who came from England and has been here for a month.

I have a became familiar with my
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neighbours
and have been
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practising
my
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favourite
hobby is walking, which is
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important
for my health.

I
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have to
return home for the
next
Sunday. It
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will wonderful
to
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see
everyone again. I do
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get
homesick, you know I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely


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Farhod
.
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IELTS letter You have been on holiday abroad Write describing your holiday to your parents

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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