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A letter to a friend who is moving to your city

A letter to a friend who is moving to your city MoxYL

Dear Sara I was over the moon to hear about your new job, I know that it's a little difficult to live in other city, but I hope you get accustomed to your new situation. So I've decided to give you some useful tips before settling in your new home. As far as I know the city center is the best place to live in, because in old zone you can easily find a cozy place with an economic budget. I don’t recommend you the new area of city center, there you should spend more money to rent. About public transport, although there is a lot of traffic congestion, you easily and rapidly can choose between bus, metro or even you can rent a bicycle. So don’t worry about commuting. If you like to meet new friends, you can choose one of the city center's famous cafes, in which every evening there is a fast meeting reunions. All of them public the schedule of their programs is their Instagram page. So you can easily follow them and stay tuned. All the best Reza

Dear Sara

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All the best

Reza