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A few days ago you bought a walkman in a duty-free shop which now has got something wrong. Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him how to solve the problem.

A few days ago you bought a walkman in a duty-free shop which now has got something wrong. Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him how to solve the problem. 2rk5M
I am writing to draw your attention to the walkman in the Sony Ericsson brand which I purchased in the duty-free shop located at 2 Board Street on July 12th. I have enclosed the photocopy of my reciept for your reference. Unfortunately, the item does not function as I expected. The first issue was the voice system of the walkman. When I arrived home, I was going to listen to music. However, the voice was inaudible. Although I retried to switch on as it was shown in instruction manual, it refused to work properly. What is more, there is a mulfunction of its buttons. They also do not work well. In my point of view, it was a faulty product of your company. I have been a loyal customer of your company for more than 5 years. This is the first time something like this had happened with one of your product. I would be grateful if you could write me how to solve the problem. And I am hoping that you may be able to send me a replacement product within two days. Thanking in advance. Kind regards.
I am writing to draw your attention to the
walkman
in the Sony Ericsson brand which I
purchased
in the duty-free shop located at 2 Board Street on July 12th. I have enclosed the photocopy of my
reciept
for your reference. Unfortunately, the item does not function as I
expected
. The
first
issue was the voice system of the
walkman
. When I arrived home, I was going to listen to music.
However
, the voice was inaudible. Although I retried to switch on as it
was shown
in instruction manual, it refused to work
properly
.

What is more
, there is a
mulfunction
of its buttons. They
also
do not work well. In my point of view, it was a faulty product of your
company
. I have been a loyal customer of your
company
for more than 5 years. This is the
first
time something like this had happened
with
one of your product. I would be grateful if you could write me how to solve the problem. And I am hoping that you may be able to
send
me a replacement product within two days. Thanking in advance. Kind regards.
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IELTS letter A few days ago you bought a walkman in a duty-free shop which now has got something wrong. Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him how to solve the problem.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
189 words
5.5
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