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You are a Cefr teacher at education center. You are writing your complaint about teachers who are studying here.

You are a Cefr teacher at education center. You are writing your complaint about teachers who are studying here. RyBqP
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about your teachers who are preparing for CEFR exam in our education center. In fact, I expected a better participating to our courses as responsible teachers but it wasn't what I waited. At the beginning of June, we organised intensive CEFR course for three months at our Zeromax educational center in Akbarabad city. When we started our courses, all of them wanted to attend and join us, therefore we were content with them for attending. They tried to do tasks and learn new words on time, yet after a month it is observed descent in their study. Some of them have intention still not have development so my complaint is about them. Furthermore, their speaking skill is very poor, they should improve it. I expect, you will acquire about the situation and you should organise motivational courses for them in terms of achieving goals and this will be really helpful With regards. Mr Demo
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about your teachers who are preparing for CEFR exam in our education center.

In fact, I
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expected
a better
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participating to
our
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courses
as responsible teachers
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but
it wasn't what I waited.

At the beginning of June, we
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organised
intensive CEFR
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course
for three months at our
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Zeromax
educational center in
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Akbarabad
city. When we
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started
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
, all of them wanted to attend and
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join
us,
therefore
we were content with them for attending. They tried
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to do
tasks and learn new words on time,
yet
after a month it
is observed
descent in their study.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
of them have intention
still
not have development
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so
my complaint is about them.
Furthermore
, their speaking
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skill
is
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very
poor, they should
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improve
it.

I
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expect
, you will acquire about the situation and you should
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organise
motivational
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
for them in terms of achieving goals and this will be
really
helpful

With regards.

Mr Demo

IELTS letter You are a Cefr teacher at education center. You are writing your complaint about teachers who are studying here.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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