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You are a Cefr teacher at education center. You are writing your complaint about teachers who are studying here.

You are a Cefr teacher at education center. You are writing your complaint about teachers who are studying here. RyBqP

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about your teachers who are preparing for CEFR exam in our education center. In fact, I expected a better participating to our courses as responsible teachers but it wasn't what I waited. At the beginning of June, we organised intensive CEFR course for three months at our Zeromax educational center in Akbarabad city. When we started our courses, all of them wanted to attend and join us, therefore we were content with them for attending. They tried to do tasks and learn new words on time, yet after a month it is observed descent in their study. Some of them have intention still not have development so my complaint is about them. Furthermore, their speaking skill is very poor, they should improve it. I expect, you will acquire about the situation and you should organise motivational courses for them in terms of achieving goals and this will be really helpful With regards. Mr Demo

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about your teachers who are preparing for CEFR exam in our education center.

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expected
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participating to
 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 as responsible teachers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it wasn't what I waited.

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organised
 intensive CEFR You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 for three months at our Possible spelling mistake found.Zero max
Zeromax
 educational center in Possible spelling mistake found.AllahabadAhmadabad
Akbarabad
 city. When we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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courses
, all of them wanted to attend and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us, therefore
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to do
 tasks and learn new words on time, yet
 after a month it is observed
 descent in their study. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of them have intention still
 not have development This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my complaint is about them. Furthermore
, their speaking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 poor, they should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 it.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
, you will acquire about the situation and you should Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 motivational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 for them in terms of achieving goals and this will be really
 helpful

With regards.

Mr Demo