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You stayed in a hotel for some days in an overseas country. You have forgotten some things in the hotel room after checkout. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter inform him about your stay. Describe the things that you have forgotten. State what you want them to do now. o

You stayed in a hotel for some days in an overseas country. You have forgotten some things in the hotel room after checkout. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter inform him about your stay. Describe the things that you have forgotten. State what you want them to do now. o m1xQA
Dear Sir, My name is Sudha Suresh. Last month I attended a meeting in Dubai at there I stayed in your hotel from May 25th to May 27th. Room number: 58c. I really enjoyed the stay and your hospitality was amazing. I highly recommend your hotel to my friends who regularly visit Dubai for their business needs. I am writing this letter to inform you that I h as ve forgotten My DSLR camera and pendrive in your hotel room and it contains important documents as well. I realised that I forgot these things when I was in airport. Immediately I called back to hotel number and informed this matter to Mr. Anil assistant manager of your hotel. But I could not came back to collect it because I was short of time. Next week one of friends Rimi visiting your city. I give her your hotel address and number. They will come and collect my things from you. Please ensure the things are safe. I expect your cooperation in this matter. Yours Faithfully.
Dear Sir, My name is
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Sudha
Suresh. Last month I attended a meeting in Dubai at there I stayed in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
from May 25th to May 27th. Room number: 58c. I
really
enjoyed the stay and your hospitality was amazing. I
highly
recommend your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
to my friends who
regularly
visit Dubai for their business needs.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to inform you that I h as ve forgotten My DSLR camera and
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pendrive
in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
room and it contains
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
documents
as well
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that I forgot these things when I was in airport. Immediately I called back to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
number and informed this matter to Mr. Anil assistant manager of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I could not
The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "come"
came
back to collect it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I was short of time.

Next
week one of friends
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Rimi
visiting your city. I give her your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
address and number. They will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and collect my things from you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
ensure the things are safe. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
your cooperation in this matter. Yours
Faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You stayed in a hotel for some days in an overseas country. You have forgotten some things in the hotel room after checkout. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter inform him about your stay. Describe the things that you have forgotten. State what you want them to do now. o

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  American English
3 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
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