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the letter is based on apology for mistake

the letter is based on apology for mistake 7a2QX
Dear Nigora Tojiboyeva, I am writing in connection with you to ask from you to forgive me for my faults. My mistakes involves in leaving school before our lessons are completely over. First of all, I must inform that, I am attending to English courses in IPEC. However, due to my teacher’s prohibits, I had to left the class. As I must have been examined. Therefore, I must apologize profusely for my unpleasant behavior. I hope, this will not have a negative impact on our connection with you. I decided to make you promise to attend to all lessons in time and go to school every day. once again, I hope my apologies will be accepted. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Sevinch, Yo’ldashaliyeva.
Dear
Nigora
Tojiboyeva
,

I am writing in connection with you to ask from you to forgive me for my faults. My mistakes
involves
in leaving school
before
our lessons are completely over.
First of all
, I
must
inform that, I am attending to English courses in
IPEC
.
However
, due to my teacher’s prohibits, I had to
left
the
class
.
As
I
must
have
been examined
.
Therefore
, I
must
apologize
profusely
for my unpleasant behavior. I hope, this will not have a
negative
impact on our connection with you. I decided to
make
you promise to attend to all lessons in time and go to school every day.
once
again, I hope my apologies will be
accepted
. I’m looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Your
sincerely
,

Sevinch
, Yo’
ldashaliyeva
.
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IELTS letter the letter is based on apology for mistake

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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