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the letter is based on apology for mistake

the letter is based on apology for mistake 7a2QX

Dear Nigora Tojiboyeva, I am writing in connection with you to ask from you to forgive me for my faults. My mistakes involves in leaving school before our lessons are completely over. First of all, I must inform that, I am attending to English courses in IPEC. However, due to my teacher’s prohibits, I had to left the class. As I must have been examined. Therefore, I must apologize profusely for my unpleasant behavior. I hope, this will not have a negative impact on our connection with you. I decided to make you promise to attend to all lessons in time and go to school every day. once again, I hope my apologies will be accepted. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Sevinch, Yo’ldashaliyeva.

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Nigora
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tojiboyeva
,

I am writing in connection with you to ask from you to forgive me for my faults. My mistakes You should probably use "involve".involve
involves
 in leaving school This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 our lessons are completely over. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 inform that, I am attending to English courses in Possible spelling mistake found.IECSpecAPECIPCIPCCOPEC
IPEC
. However
, due to my teacher’s prohibits, I had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have been examined
. Therefore
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 apologize profusely
 for my unpleasant behavior. I hope, this will not have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on our connection with you. I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 you promise to attend to all lessons in time and go to school every day. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOnce
once
 again, I hope my apologies will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
. I’m looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

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Sevinch
, Yo’Possible spelling mistake found.
ldashaliyeva
. 