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You and your co-worker often have lunch in a nearby park. However, there have been too many birds in the park lately, especially the pigeons who want your food. The situation is spoiling your lunch break.Describe the importance of the park to you and your colleagues. Explain how the birds have affected you. Suggest what the newspaper’s readers, or city officials and park managers, can do to improve the situation.

You and your co-worker often have lunch in a nearby park. However, there have been too many birds in the park lately, especially the pigeons who want your food. The situation is spoiling your lunch break. Describe the importance of the park to you and your colleagues. Explain how the birds have affected you. Suggest what the newspaper’s readers, or city officials and park managers, can do to improve the situation. 6xBax

Dear Reader I would make a light on the concern which me and follow facing in the nearby ground of our office building. Most of part of the this area, captured or covered by the bird litter and they are annoying us all the time by demanding the food. Everyday, when we have a break from the work we use this place to get meal together. in this way, we can discuss our social and work related problem and this situation, not only create strong bound between us but also give us a time to forget about office hectic. in my point of view, the problem is a big most of sitting bench are floored with the pigeon poo. its because of, there is tree over the sitting which present a best place to the feather ones to make nest. Also, when we open our lunch box bird surround us and start to chirping. To me, it looks like they are requesting food so I can not able to stop feeding my food to them. There is a number of things which we can do, first of all management just make sure nobody should be allowed to drop food to the flying ones. Even, they can draw signs over the crowd location or where most of birds seen. Regarding to it, if officials want need any kind of help and they want that we change our food location I am always happy to do that I will really thankful for reading this mail.

Dear Reader

I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a light on the concern which me and follow facing in the nearby ground of our office building. Consider using "Most part" or "Most of the part".Most partMost of the part
Most of part
 of Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "this" is left.thethis
the this
 area, captured or covered by the bird Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).litter, and
litter and
 they are annoying us all the time by demanding the food.

'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?Every day
Everyday
, when we have a break from the work we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 meal together. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 this way, we can discuss our social and work related problem and this situation, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 create strong bound between us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 give us a time to forget about office hectic.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 my point of view, the problem is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 most of sitting bench are floored
 with the pigeon poo. Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of, there is tree over the sitting which present Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 best place to the feather ones to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 nest. Also
, when we open our lunch box bird surround us and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to chirping. To me, it looks like they are requesting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 feeding my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 to them.

There is a number of things which we can do, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 management This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure nobody should be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to drop You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 to the flying ones. Even, they can draw signs over the crowd location or where After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the birds") or simply say "most birds".most of the birdsmost birds
most of birds
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
. The phrase 'Regarding to' is not correct. Use "Regarding" or "regard to".RegardingRegard to
Regarding to
 it, if officials want need any kind of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).help, and
help and
 they Did you mean "want us to"?want us to
want that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 location I am always happy to do that

I will really
 thankful for reading this mail. 