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A TV program wants to create a show about a place and they want ideas from people about where to go.Write a letter to the producer of the show and say: what your suggestion is, how you know about the place, And why you think it would attract viewers

A TV program wants to create a show about a place and they want ideas from people about where to go. Write a letter to the producer of the show and say: what your suggestion is, how you know about the place, And why you think it would attract viewers e5rbx
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to suggest you an amazing place which is suitable to create a show. My name is Sandy and I hail from Amritsar district. As I watch your show 'people and places' which represents culture of different areas, and I came to know your are asking for ideas. There is a famous sikh temple which is known as Golden temple. I consider that is perfect for your show to see how many people on daily basis come there and community kitchen where numerous individuals come and eat together without any restrictions. It be spread love and affection in the society. If you dedicate one episode of your TV show to this place. It would be an eye opener to many people who have narrow minds about religions. Hoping to see a show on this place on your TV channel soon. Yours faithfully, Sandy
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to suggest you an amazing place which is suitable to create a
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. My name is Sandy and I hail from Amritsar district. As I
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there and community kitchen where numerous individuals
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and eat together without any restrictions. It
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spread
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and affection in the society.
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you dedicate one episode of your TV
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to this place. It would be an
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eye opener
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many
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people
who have narrow minds about religions. Hoping to
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see
a
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show
on this place on your TV channel
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. Yours
faithfully
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Sandy

IELTS letter A TV program wants to create a show about a place and they want ideas from people about where to go. Write a letter to the producer of the show and say: what your suggestion is, how you know about the place, And why you think it would attract viewers

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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