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You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in the other city. You mistakenly left a file with important documents at their house. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file, tell them why it is important. ask him/her to return it to you by post

Dear Ajay, Hope you are doing great. First of all, thank you for your wonderful hospitality that you have provided me over the last weekend. Half of my burden got relieved after knowing I can stay at your place when I visit Mumbai for my business meeting. I also like to thank your wife for the awesome food. The reason that I am writing you now is that I have left an important file in your home. I realized this only when I opened my bags in the morning. It is a blue colour file with my name written on it. It has several important documents like my business visa, bank statements and other financial documents. I have kept them in the first rack of the big cupboard. Can you please check if they are there? If you find them at the same place, please return me through post as soon as you can and while doing this please wrap the file with a polythene cover and then keep it in a cardboard box as any damage for them throws me to several issues. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours loving friend, Manikanth
Dear Ajay,

Hope you are doing great.
First of all
, thank you for your wonderful hospitality that you have provided me over the last weekend. Half of my burden
got
relieved after knowing I can stay at your place when I visit Mumbai for my business meeting. I
also
like to thank your wife for the awesome food.

The reason that I am writing you
now
is
that I have
left
an
important
file in your home. I realized this
only
when I opened my bags in the morning. It is a blue
colour
file with my name written on it. It has several
important
documents like my business visa, bank statements and other financial documents. I have
kept
them in the
first
rack of the
big
cupboard. Can you
please
check
if they are there?

If you find them at the same place,
please
return me through post as
soon
as you can and while doing this
please
wrap the file with a polythene cover and then
keep
it in a cardboard box as any damage for them throws me to several issues.

I hope to hear from you
soon
.

Yours loving friend,

Manikanth
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IELTS letter You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in the other city. You mistakenly left a file with important documents at their house. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file, tell them why it is important. ask him/her to return it to you by post

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  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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