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Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: Explain the situation Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date Ask for a different date to present your thesis

Dear Sir, I am Manikanth Grandhi, from 2nd year MBA, writing this letter to request you to postpone my thesis project presentation which is planned on 1st of March. Unfortunately, on the same date my sister is getting married in Spain and I have no options left other than to attend. Since my to be brother-in-law need to go back to work by March 5th, my family took this decision. I tried in all the possible ways to change the wedding date but in vain. This is not intentional and want to memorize you that, how you appreciated me on the mock thesis presentation day. Also, I am the topper from last three trimesters and I also strongly believe that it will continue this trimester as well. I will return from Spain on 4th of March and I would be grateful if it is possible for you to change the date of presentation to March 5th. Looking forward for your positive response. Yours Sincerely, Manikanth Grandhi
Dear Sir,

I am
Manikanth
Grandhi
, from 2nd year MBA, writing this letter to request you to postpone my thesis project presentation which
is planned
on 1st of March.

Unfortunately, on the same date my sister is getting married in Spain and I have no options
left
other than to attend. Since my to be brother-in-law need to go back to work by March 5th, my family took this decision. I tried in all the possible ways to
change
the wedding date
but
in vain.

This is not intentional and want to memorize you that, how you appreciated me on the mock thesis presentation day.
Also
, I am the topper from last three trimesters and I
also
strongly
believe that it will continue this trimester
as well
.

I will return from Spain on 4th of March and I would be grateful if it is possible for you to
change
the date of presentation to March 5th.

Looking forward for your
positive
response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Manikanth
Grandhi
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IELTS letter Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: Explain the situation Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date Ask for a different date to present your thesis

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6.0
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