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Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: Explain the situation Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date Ask for a different date to present your thesis

Dear Sir, I am Manikanth Grandhi, from 2nd year MBA, writing this letter to request you to postpone my thesis project presentation which is planned on 1st of March. Unfortunately, on the same date my sister is getting married in Spain and I have no options left other than to attend. Since my to be brother-in-law need to go back to work by March 5th, my family took this decision. I tried in all the possible ways to change the wedding date but in vain. This is not intentional and want to memorize you that, how you appreciated me on the mock thesis presentation day. Also, I am the topper from last three trimesters and I also strongly believe that it will continue this trimester as well. I will return from Spain on 4th of March and I would be grateful if it is possible for you to change the date of presentation to March 5th. Looking forward for your positive response. Yours Sincerely, Manikanth Grandhi

Dear Sir,

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Manikanth
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Grandhi
, from 2nd year MBA, writing this letter to request you to postpone my thesis project presentation which is planned
 on 1st of March.

Unfortunately, on the same date my sister is getting married in Spain and I have no options This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 other than to attend. Since my to be brother-in-law need to go back to work by March 5th, my family took this decision. I tried in all the possible ways to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the wedding date This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in vain.

This is not intentional and want to memorize you that, how you appreciated me on the mock thesis presentation day. Also
, I am the topper from last three trimesters and I also
strongly
 believe that it will continue this trimester as well
.

I will return from Spain on 4th of March and I would be grateful if it is possible for you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the date of presentation to March 5th.

Looking forward for your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

Yours Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.ManikinManikinsMankato
Manikanth
Possible spelling mistake found.GandhiGrand hi
Grandhi

IELTS letter Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: Explain the situation Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date Ask for a different date to present your thesis

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

165 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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