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You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request your assistance in getting a suitable property for me and my family in Canada to which we are moving next month. My name is Manikanth. We are not a big family as it consists only my father, mother, and my wife. It was a quick decision to immigrate and I have no options left other than consulting you. I preferably want a three-bedroom house with a garden or backyard. Since both my parents past their 60, they cannot take steps frequently and therefore I want a bedroom to be located at the downstairs of the house. Also, a house with furniture is always appreciated. I do not want the house to be located in a busy area. I always select those houses away from the happening places. Even though the house is away from the downtown, I prefer it should be within 5 miles radius from temple, supermarkets, schools, and hospitals. I would be grateful if you could arrange a house for me as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Manikanth Grandhi
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request your assistance in getting a suitable property for me and my family in Canada to which we are moving
next
month.

My name is
Manikanth
. We are not a
big
family as it consists
only
my father, mother, and my wife. It was a quick decision to immigrate and I have no options
left
other than consulting you.

I
preferably
want a three-bedroom
house
with a garden or backyard. Since both my parents past their 60, they cannot take steps
frequently
and
therefore
I want a bedroom to
be located
at the downstairs of the
house
.
Also
, a
house
with furniture is always appreciated.

I do not want the
house
to
be located
in a busy area. I always select those
houses
away from the happening places.
Even though
the
house
is away from the downtown, I prefer it should be within
5 miles
radius from temple, supermarkets, schools, and hospitals.

I would be grateful if you could arrange a
house
for me as
soon
as possible.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Manikanth
Grandhi
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IELTS letter You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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