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You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write to your friend about this place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there describe what you saw offer to take your friend there

Dear Sarath, Hope you are fine. I was really happy to receive your last letter and it seems you are doing quite well and have finally landed on your feet. I am writing to tell you about a place that is fascinating. Firstly, the place is Sri Venkateshwara Swamy Temple, Tirumala which is a devotional place located in southern India. I visited the temple last weekend to fulfil my mom’s long time wish and it was awesome, and I feel lucky to be at that place. It was a hill and I observed, experienced very peaceful environment. Everywhere, we listened the lord’s chanting with soothing background. Opposite to what we see every day, there is no plastic usage, no untidy streets, and no chargeable transportation. I am there for 2 days and all these days what I felt unknowingly is a relaxed mind and heart. I was quite thrilled to know that you are visiting me next month and I want to take you to the temple, as I know you are fond of devotional places and here you will get an added benefit of called peace. I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours loving friend, Manikanth
Dear
Sarath
,

Hope you are fine. I was
really
happy to receive your last letter and it seems you are doing quite well and have
finally
landed on your feet. I am writing to
tell
you about a
place
that is
fascinating.

Firstly
, the
place
is Sri
Venkateshwara
Swamy
Temple,
Tirumala
which is a devotional
place
located in southern India. I visited the temple last weekend to fulfil my mom’s long time wish and it was awesome, and I feel lucky to be at that place.

It was a hill and I observed, experienced
very
peaceful environment. Everywhere, we listened the lord’s chanting with soothing background. Opposite to what we
see
every day, there is no plastic usage, no untidy streets, and no chargeable transportation. I am there for 2 days and all these days what I felt
unknowingly
is a relaxed mind and heart.

I was quite thrilled to know that you are visiting me
next
month and I want to take you to the temple, as I know you are fond of devotional
places
and here you will
get
an
added
benefit of called peace.

I
look forward to seeing you
soon
.

Yours loving friend,

Manikanth
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IELTS letter You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write to your friend about this place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there describe what you saw offer to take your friend there

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  American English
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197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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