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You stayed at your friend’s house

You stayed at your friend’s house AB55w
Dear James, Hope this email finds you in good health. First of all, I would like to thank you for spending your valuable time with me. Though we met after a long time you have shown extraordinary hospitality and drove me in your car to attend my business seminar without any traveling hassles. Pal, while my stay at your home accidentally I forgot an important file which was having confidential client contracts. Since the documents were private I kept them safely in your Almira and probably might have forgotten to take it as I was getting late to make my flight. The file is in brown color with my name on it. In fact, you will not face any problem distinguishing it as the closet was totally empty. Moreover, I also would like to tell you that the file is very important to me as it not only has the old existing business contracts but most importantly the new contracts which I’ve signed on my visit to your city. I would appreciate it if you can personally visit the DHL office and choose to ship it with express service. Moreover please make sure the file is properly wrapped safely in a cover within your presence before they process to ship. Thank you once again for all your efforts, you have always been a savior. Best Wishes, Henry
Dear James,

Hope this email finds you in
good
health.
First of all
, I would like to thank you for spending your valuable time with me. Though we met after a long time you have shown extraordinary hospitality and drove me in your car to attend my business seminar without any traveling hassles.

Pal, while my stay at your home
accidentally
I forgot an
important
file
which was having confidential client contracts. Since the documents were private I
kept
them
safely
in your
Almira
and
probably
might have forgotten to take it as I was getting late to
make
my flight.

The
file
is in brown color with my name on it. In fact, you will not face any problem distinguishing it as the closet was
totally
empty.
Moreover
, I
also
would like to
tell
you that the
file
is
very
important
to me as it not
only
has the
old
existing business contracts
but
most
importantly
the new contracts which I’ve signed on my visit to your city.

I would appreciate it if you can
personally
visit the DHL office and choose to ship it with express service.
Moreover
please
make
sure the
file
is
properly
wrapped
safely
in a cover within your presence
before
they process to ship.

Thank you once again for all your efforts, you have always been a savior.

Best Wishes,

Henry
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IELTS letter You stayed at your friend’s house

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
226 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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