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Hello Smith I am writing to enquire about the short term French language course. My friend Linda had learned French from your academy and she insisted that I should contact you. I want to learn the advanced French as it is required for my job/work. I am a project manager so I have to interact with a number of clients. A huge number of my clients are French. Although I can converse with them in English, I suppose I can communicate more efficiently with them if I speak their native language. Moreover, proficiency in French will be an additional skill that I can mention in my resume. Before I join the class, I would like to have answers for a few queries. How much time do you think I will need to be a fluent French speaker and how much will you charge for the lessons? Also, will I be taught to read and write French in addition to speaking it? Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely ABC
Hello Smith

I am writing to
enquire
about the short term French language course. My friend Linda had learned French from your
academy and
she insisted that I should contact you.

I want to learn the advanced French as it
is required
for my job/work. I am a project manager
so
I
have to
interact with a number of clients. A huge number of my clients are French. Although I can converse with them in English, I suppose I can communicate more
efficiently
with them if I speak their native language.
Moreover
, proficiency in French will be an additional
skill
that I can mention in my resume.

Before
I
join
the
class
, I would like to have answers for a few queries. How much time do you
think
I will need to be a fluent French speaker and how much will you charge for the lessons?
Also
, will I
be taught
to read and write French
in addition
to speaking it?

Thank you for your time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely


ABC
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