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Dear Mr Sharipov. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about how to teach my students in writing skill in English. I am also an English teacher at Samarkand State Institute of Foreign Languages. My students want to get international certificates to carry out their study in abroad. So I should explain how to write letters and essays clearly and easily. I know it is not difficult to write an introduction and conclusion of both tasks. But, I always come across with some misunderstandings in main body. Because, main body is an important part of writing task. That's why, everyone should write clearly their essays with topic sentence, supporting details and of course with examples. Can you give me some advice about writing skill and What kind of materials can you recommend? I would appreciate it if you could give me your advice as soon as possible. I hope you will write answer to my letter. Your sincerelyFarida Faxriddinovna
Dear Mr
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Sharipov
. I would appreciate it if you could give me
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advice about how to teach my students in writing
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in English. I am
also
an English teacher at Samarkand State Institute of Foreign Languages. My students want to
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get
international certificates to carry out their study in abroad.
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So
I should
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explain
how to
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write
letters and essays
clearly
and
easily
. I know it is not difficult to
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write
an introduction and conclusion of both tasks.
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But
, I always
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come
across with
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misunderstandings in main body.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
, main body is an
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important
part of writing task. That's why, everyone should
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write
clearly
their essays with topic sentence, supporting
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details
and
of course
with examples. Can you give me
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some
advice about writing
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skill
and What kind of materials can you recommend? I would appreciate it if you could give me your advice as
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soon
as possible. I hope you will
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write
answer to my letter. Your
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sincerelyFarida
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Faxriddinovna
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IELTS letter Ask an advice from your tutor who teaches you in writing skill

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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