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You would like to improve your skills in English. You should ask some advice to help from your colleague.

You would like to improve your skills in English. You should ask some advice to help from your colleague. 8arqB
Dear Mr. Aslanov I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about rising my four skills in English. I am also an English teacher and I decided to get one of the international or national English certificates. Unfortunately to get such kind of certificates is not easy, especially C1 level. First of all, it would be great help if you give me your advice for improving my listening and reading skills. What kind of textbooks or manuals can you recommend? My sore spot is speaking. How can I improve my vocabulary base? The last but not least, give me please some advice how to write letter sand essays meaningful and without mistakes. It is difficult to recognise but I have some problems with my writing skill also. I would greatly appreciate your assistance in this matter. Awaiting your reply. Yours sincerely, Mrs Hilton.
Dear Mr.
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Aslanov
I would appreciate it if you could give me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice about rising my four
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in English. I am
also
an English teacher and I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
one of the international or national English certificates. Unfortunately to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
such kind of certificates is not easy,
especially
C1 level.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it would be great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
if you give me your advice for improving my listening and reading
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. What kind of textbooks or manuals can you recommend? My sore spot is speaking. How can I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my vocabulary base? The last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least, give me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice how to write letter sand essays meaningful and without mistakes. It is difficult to
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recognise
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but
I have
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some
problems with my writing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
also
. I would
greatly
appreciate your assistance in this matter. Awaiting your reply. Yours
sincerely
, Mrs Hilton.
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IELTS letter You would like to improve your skills in English. You should ask some advice to help from your colleague.

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  American English
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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