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Letter for admission in university

Letter for admission in university 0MELG
Dear sir My name is Jinu George. I am a Citizen of india. I have applied in your university for IT course for the july 2021 intake, but due to the covid 19 circumstances I was not able to come and join as per the date mentioned in the offer letter provided by the university. In that scenario, I wish to reapply for the same course starting in February 2022. I request you to  furnish an offer letter mentioning the date as in February 2022, so that I can move forward with my bank loan procedures. I hope your utmost consideration of this request and look forward to confirmation letter from your office. If u have any queries, you may contact me at (mail I'd) Yours sincerely Jinu george
Dear sir

My name is
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Jinu
George. I am a Citizen of
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india
. I have applied in your university for IT course for the
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july
2021 intake,
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but
due to the
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covid 19
circumstances I was not able to
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come
and
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join
as per the date mentioned in the offer letter provided by the university. In that scenario, I wish to
reapply
for the same course starting in February 2022.

I request you to
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furnish an offer letter mentioning the date as in February 2022,
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so
that I can
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move
forward with my bank loan procedures. I hope your utmost consideration of this request and look forward to confirmation letter from your office. If u have any queries, you may contact me at (mail I'd)

Yours
sincerely


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george

IELTS letter Letter for admission in university

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
128 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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