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Dear David, I am Jacob, your new next door neighbor. I have recently received a written complaint from the residents of our building regarding the noise coming from my house. I would like to apologize for any inconvenience caused due to the noise. As soon as I moved to this new flat, I realized that all the door knobs are lose and the kitchen shelves are weak. So I decided to get them fixed before my family moves in. I was just informed by one of our neighbors that you have an infant at home and he is not able to sleep in the afternoon due to the noise. Please accept my deepest apologies as I am myself a parent and I understand what you might be going through. I have advised the carpenter to come early tomorrow and try to finish the pending work and also requested him to bring a helper with him so that the work can be completed as soon as possible. Once again, I would like to extend my apologies and looking forward to invite you and your family for a nice dinner. ThanksJacob

Dear David,

I am Jacob, your new next
 door neighbor. I have recently received a written complaint from the residents of our building regarding the noise coming from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to apologize for any inconvenience caused due to the noise. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to this new flat, I realized that all the door knobs are Consider using a past participle here: "lost".lost
lose
 and the kitchen shelves are weak. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 my family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 in.

I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 informed by one of our neighbors that you have an infant at Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).home, and
home and
 he is not able to sleep in the afternoon due to the noise. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept my deepest apologies as I am myself a parent and I understand what you might be going through. I have advised the carpenter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 early tomorrow and try to finish the pending work and also
 requested him to bring a helper with him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the work can be completed
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Once again, I would like to extend my apologies and looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to inviting".to inviting
to invite
 you and your family for a nice dinner.

Possible spelling mistake found.Thanks Jacob
ThanksJacob