Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You should giving, advice, to go to college or try to get a job

You should giving, advice, to go to college or try to get a job rbX2J
Dear John I am writing in reply to your letter asking for advice. First of all, you learn your subjects and you work in your subjects and you work in your time. If you do not learn, you will be unknowledge. It is harmful for you. However you are smart. I think that you need very-very books and learn you subjects. You have to read very hard. If you learn header, you own of good job It is very good idea. You have to read a every day and it is do not work because you are young. To go to school and you go other study centres. If you do not study now you work in bad work. I suggest some jobs for you. There are teacher policeman fermer businesmann and others. Businesmann is a good job. Because you have every day. Teacher is a very good job and fermer i don't know. I think that it is helpful for you. Best wishes. Goodbye
Dear John I am writing in reply to your letter asking for advice.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
your subjects and you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in your subjects and you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in your time. If you do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
, you will be
Possible spelling mistake found.
unknowledge
. It is harmful for you.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
you are smart. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that you need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
books and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
you subjects. You
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
read
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
header, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
job


It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
. You
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
read
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
every day and it is
Consider using a past participle here: "done".
do
not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
you are young. To go to school and you go other study
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
. If you do not study
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. I suggest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
jobs for you. There are teacher policeman
Possible spelling mistake found.
fermer
Possible spelling mistake found.
businesmann
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Businesmann
is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
job.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
you have every day. Teacher is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
job and
Possible spelling mistake found.
fermer
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
don't know. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that it is helpful for you. Best wishes. Goodbye
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You should giving, advice, to go to college or try to get a job

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts